I may have committed a hundred sins by now !
GOD do you find me guilty of those all?
When people have love around their life,
And I have no one to share my solitude.
I cry alone in the long nights,
With no dreams in my eyes,
I stand alone in the World,
As the Old Oak stands near the fort.
The Old Oak has birds perching and chirping,
My life is as silent as the night,
Dark hours fade away by the dawn,
No one hears my moans.
Hope has ended with every passing day,
Not one man I find who would brighten my life,
Unknowingly I may have committed a crime,
God tell me till when will the justice be denied?
GOD do you find me guilty of those all?
When people have love around their life,
And I have no one to share my solitude.
I cry alone in the long nights,
With no dreams in my eyes,
I stand alone in the World,
As the Old Oak stands near the fort.
The Old Oak has birds perching and chirping,
My life is as silent as the night,
Dark hours fade away by the dawn,
No one hears my moans.
Hope has ended with every passing day,
Not one man I find who would brighten my life,
Unknowingly I may have committed a crime,
God tell me till when will the justice be denied?
You are very talented, but I hope you are really not that sad. There is hope,forgiveness, and fulfillment.
ReplyDeleteThanks my dear for liking it. I hope that someday hope walks into my garden followed by fulfillment. I am sad,hope to overcome it in a few months time.
ReplyDeleteVery good poem. With your faith strong like it is God will bless you with the love you seek when he feels you are ready. Keep your faith and NEVER lose hope. Great blog!
ReplyDeleteThankyou Shawn, really thankful to you for liking the poem and yes I hope I keep hope alive.
DeleteBeautifully expressed your feelings...we can feel that! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kitty :)
DeleteSo deep :'D
ReplyDeleteGood, I got that feeling :)
Appreciate this Echa, Thank You for visiting my blog. :)
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